No Place Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No Place

Rating: 2.8


There is no place in life for gloom
Why that should be felt in little room?
How is it going to help him in reality?
This speaks badly of him for future eventuality

No doubt, the temporary set backs make you unhappy
Compel to think of negative side and make unsteady
The situation should be not allowed to slip out of hand
Even the greedy people will leave you as friend

No one praises sun’s decline
Everybody wants bright future and sunshine
The life is full of ups and down
The next move should be positive and made known

Why do we prepare in advance?
Why do we not take any chance?
Even though it doe not offer any success
Yet we try our best to have full access

Leave it to fate and coming future
The journey is bound to alter for sure
Who knows what shall be lying for you in store?
But reward and outcome shall always be there

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 January 2014

There is no place in life for gloom Why that should be felt in little room?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 2 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 January 2014

Pushing through the ups and downs Tracey Teel5 minutes ago This is inspirational. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 January 2014

5 Stars Gerald Stewart Jr7 minutes ago Loved it :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 January 2014

nice isaac meza3 minutes ago Great inspiration Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 January 2014

it was ok Stephanie Owensby4 minutes ago it was an ok poem but you jumped around a little to much and while reading it you can get easily confused work on it a little more practice is always good. :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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