I read your message yesterday
I did not answer right away
Now as I wonder why
I feel my life is just a lie
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The exploration of something so common yet left to some kind of endless neverland is something worth putting on paper and discussing. I appreciate you doing so and I gave you a 9 for it alone. Your treatment was fair. No prejudice revealed. A reality hard to imagine when generated by inspiration. Yet, it is so. GW62
I must disagree with a vote of 9. This poem is perfectly worded in every line. Definately a 10 out of 10.