No Whisper, No Sound. Comments

Beautiful piece. It doesn't reveal it all that keeps you digging.

This is a very good poem, I like it very much--Melvina

woah that was so good sounds like it should be in like school books for kids like me to study idk it was really good though awesome job! Lylyanna

This poem with a little work and choice of words could turn into a stand out poem it will stand on its' own steve but you could edit the poem and improve the poem for your own satisfaction If you are a serious poet Or you could say get stuffed AJS and i would not be offended i will mark it with a seven but it could be a ten Warm Regards AJS