No Words Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No Words

Rating: 5.0


Poemhunter is unique
The honorable readers speak
In silence with no words
As if giving grace from lords

Even trees offer fruits
When stone is thrown at it
The cruel gesture is met with kindness
Here comments meet with unkindness

Not to speak in favor or against is considered good quality
It is great asset and always helpful for humanity
You come across no trouble by offering comment
The reason for anger is absolutely absent

Poems after poems go unread
As if sentiments have gone dead
What do I take it as mere recognition?
Write no more and go for extra tuition!

Columns are provided
Word like “read” can be inserted
That may grant you safe berth
Enough of scope to work and feel with

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 December 2013

8 December 2013 My dear Mehta-ji, Your sarcasm was enjoyable. It has stings without venom. Reminds me again Tagore's poem 'Adhunika' the few starting lines of which are as follows - Read your letter - no comment, / But the heat therein does me foment: / In my poetic enthuse / Care for modern ladies* I refuse / (Read * Poets) Such impertinence monstrous if you suspect, / One mum on it is never a poet. / ..................................../ .................................... Rajat Das Gupta Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata Dec 08,2013 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2013

Sure Ry Du12 minutes ago Nice one.. and here are the comments Comment +1 very good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2013

Timo ryan12 minutes ago I like it Comment +1 Not bad i like the ending very clever

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2013

Chris York12 minutes ago the ending is very nice i enjoyed reading the ending very much! only joking smashing poem mate Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2013

Poemhunter is unique The honorable readers speak

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