No Words To Describe The Emptyness Poem by Efrat Rose

No Words To Describe The Emptyness

Rating: 5.0


There are no words to describe

The emptiness inside 

That big, huge hole

That used to be my soule

My broken, shattered heart

That just fell apart.

Those pices of me

 Thats no one wants to see.

The sadness and the lies

The tears falling from my eyes

There is no way to explain

That darkness in my brain

There is no chance to speak

Without my eyes starting to leak

Sunday, May 28, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: sad,lonliness,depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I really couldnt find word to describe how I feel. But i tried, and that is it...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Efrat Rose 12 July 2023

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Poignant poem. Beautifully crafted, touching the heart of the reader. Good.5*

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Efrat Rose 06 June 2023

I appreciate your comment

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Mohammad Muzzammil 30 May 2023

This heartfelt poem beautifully conveys the profound emptiness and pain experienced by the poet. The use of vivid imagery, such as the big, huge hole that used to be their soul and the broken, shattered heart, evokes a strong sense of loss and vulnerability.

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Efrat Rose 28 May 2023

Hope you will like it♡

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