Sunday, March 2, 2008

Nobody. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nobody knows, what she once meant to him
he now feels polarized, lost in the swim
memories fading and tenderness gone
he wrote down his feelings and made them a song
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Charles M Moore
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Chuck Audette 11 March 2008

Loved this one. Great flow and nails the ending.10+ -chuck

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Impassioned, poignant work, Charles.Mellifluous, crisp & tight construction, makes for a comely read.Solid Penning! ~ FjR ~

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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