darlric john lotik
cavite city


Rating: 5.0
Every air that I breathe
Was an every cold at my feet
Whenever I stand in the ground
I travel in space filled with sounds

With empty slot in your heart that whispers
With my ear full of callers
An empty heart with empty feelings
Can fly even have no wings

There is nothing left to give
Two horns that jump as they heave
How to learn a good life be
We'll have to wait and see

Should I strive to be happy?
There are no other keys around me
There's still hope to return your feeling?
When that is left is nothing
Friday, July 17, 2009
Liyo Denorte 08 June 2010
among your poems, i find this as the most potential work that you got so far keep on brewing, x
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~ Jon London ~ 17 July 2009
Deep motion pours from this Darlric....well penned bro...keep up the great work 10..for expression....what I like to see in poem...is emotion...you have that...nicely done
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Reshma Ramesh 17 July 2009
poignant poem...........well penned
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