Nobody Poem by darlric john lotik

Nobody

Rating: 5.0


Every air that I breathe
Was an every cold at my feet
Whenever I stand in the ground
I travel in space filled with sounds

With empty slot in your heart that whispers
With my ear full of callers
An empty heart with empty feelings
Can fly even have no wings

There is nothing left to give
Two horns that jump as they heave
How to learn a good life be
We'll have to wait and see

Should I strive to be happy?
There are no other keys around me
There's still hope to return your feeling?
When that is left is nothing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liyo Denorte 08 June 2010

among your poems, i find this as the most potential work that you got so far keep on brewing, x

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~ Jon London ~ 17 July 2009

Deep motion pours from this Darlric....well penned bro...keep up the great work 10..for expression....what I like to see in poem...is emotion...you have that...nicely done

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Reshma Ramesh 17 July 2009

poignant poem...........well penned

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