Noisy Boredom [rev] Comments

I like your note as much as your poem! Your reptilian mercurial system...Your poem throws you into your not so pleasant moment. Some of your descriptive sections do a great job of conveying what you are experiencing. The intersecting scallops and red exclamation marks are spot on with a dual meaning. I hope it's getting a bit cooler for you.

Most of my body like yours is warmer than warm. I have to keep the house at sixty seven degrees just to breath. Margaret you are steady and true a while you have been here with some twenty others. I'd like to say thank for all of your contributions.. iip.. James