Non Corresponded Feelings Poem by Rui Carlos Bila

Non Corresponded Feelings

Rating: 5.0


While fighting to forget your existence
My mind is reminded about your excellence
The attempt of thinking about you as a friend
Brings back that feeling I carry for you as a woman

Thursday, September 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 15 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Rui. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 14 September 2017

Goes to show the spiritual nature of love - temperamental and whimsical feeling, unable to control physically. Lovely piece of poetry, focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing Rui.

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Rui Carlos Bila 15 September 2017

thanks for your comment and interpretation Chinedu Dike.

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