Not A Formal Limerick Comments

A poem that has the surreal quality of a dream. A recurring theme in your poetry of the dominance of the haves over those who have not. Fascinating as always, Nimal. Sincerely, Sandra

Okay my friend, weird title; but weird is good. This is lovely and not a little bit funny. I like this idea of the goddes taking the young betrothed, because she can. it is like the old feudal rights of the land owner to having the first.. well you know what I mean. A wonderful piece. Narrated in the manner that only you can do.