Not Forgotten Poem by Adam Dumais

Not Forgotten

Rating: 4.5


You say that I'll forget that I'll move on
I sleep at dawn for my mind buzzes with thoughts
of you that I know to be true, I wish I could cry even
though I try I find it easier to die but do not look at me
as a freak i simply seek a way to free myself from
the torment you instill into me
though you know not how much I've fought with the thought
of death it enshrouds me like a wreath so I finish this with no ryhme
just
Sorry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

There was a truth here but i self sabotaged even that if i could go back id of not gotten back together with her because id have not done somthing truly monsterous

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Emma Adamyan 15 July 2009

ur so young, but u do choose creative way of view. its surely ur goal, thanks for the poem

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Megan White 22 March 2009

it's nice i really like this poem especally the ending

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 30 November 2008

Your still doin good because this one turned out nice The ending is great too Good job Adam

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great i like the ending.. This is nice.. Krista

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