Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar


Notbroken - Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Introduction: We have two eyes, two ears, two hands, two feet but one soul. We came to this world for many purposes, for many tests. And among all the tests, we are here to find our perfect companion to make our lives actually complete and start a new expedition. Two tracks merged into one that can never be separated. And to make the ground not get cracked, we need to be that strong enough...no matter how many earthquakes drive by.


When the glowing sun will shine,
I'll start my quest to seek my fate
The moment when you will be mine,
You will know why you're so great

Now, I've tried so hard to make you realize
You really don't have to be afraid,
Of all the things you feel alive
Your soul is as elegant as a pure jade

When time comes we all have to go,
Because life never stays all frozen
And when the night falls upon your door,
I need you to be Notbroken.

When I'm gone, you be strong
I need you to wipe your tears and believe,
No matter how far away, I'm always here with you
As you're my truth, my fate, my everything...


Comments about Notbroken by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

  • Shamba Kaunda (2/4/2012 11:52:00 PM)

    What a poem....you are talented be proud of your self...i rate it 10. Nyc work..Please read and comment on my new poem 'cry of a broken man' (Report)Reply

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  • (10/7/2011 11:54:00 PM)

    WOW! thats passion...i love this poem.. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/2/2011 5:57:00 PM)

    You showed feel feelings in a deep way. I loved it (Report)Reply

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  • (9/3/2011 5:33:00 AM)

    Amazing! I Love it! =) (Report)Reply

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  • (8/29/2011 8:32:00 AM)

    The introduction is what prepares me for the poem and the poem is what puts me in love. If everything was written by you, everything will be so emotional and great. I love these piece. NICE JOB! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/15/2011 8:02:00 PM)

    This is a very deep poem! The introduction is pretty amazing too. I think it's so true how 'life never stays frozen' and we as people need to just keep moving, so we cam continue on our path and find who really matters in our lives (: this is an excellent write on soulmates and how fate eventually leads us to them. Your words are truely beautiful. Keep up the good work: D! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/10/2011 1:46:00 PM)

    This is deep and really awesome. I suck at comments so yea. Can't give you a great comment. But i really love this one (Report)Reply

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  • David Gerardino (8/8/2011 11:49:00 PM)

    Because life never stays all frozen, so true, , , , , , , , the only thing that i dont like is your story seems a bit to redundent, still very good........ (Report)Reply

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  • (8/7/2011 12:28:00 PM)

    Thats amazing and so swweeeet! (Report)Reply

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  • G.Y Hammed (8/7/2011 8:24:00 AM)

    You said I may read two, I I have read four and may still read more...you are just talented! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/6/2011 5:19:00 AM)

    thank you for letting me read your poems.
    ' life never stays all frozen'...
    I'll keep that in mind :)
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/5/2011 8:45:00 AM)

    A very nice piece of work. Keep it up and let us learn from you as well.

    Thank you.
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  • (8/5/2011 8:41:00 AM)

    This is just beautiful:

    'Your soul is as elegant as a pure jade'
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  • Vangile Mtyali (8/5/2011 7:51:00 AM)

    man u almost made me cry n u made me believe in true love. I love this poem so much (Report)Reply

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  • (8/2/2011 10:11:00 AM)

    So emotional, breathtaking, intense and sad, yet extremely hopeful, peaceful and faithful! ! the words really made me feel like I'm the speaker and the spoken to is my companion in this world...very grasping and conspicuous. and again, the intro made it so much more attractive, I admire this about you, people can't find enough words to put into their poems and barely make sense yet here you are with these awesome intro's to your poems, even the intro's are damn poetic and strikes the heart! ! !

    This is by far one of your best poems ever! ! My younger sister who is 17 too read this and she's practically in love with your talents and approach towards life, your name is a bookmark in her computer! well done brother! 10/10 yet again...
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  • (8/2/2011 7:22:00 AM)

    This is an astonishing poem, give so much hope to them who's lives are drowning. you aid a lot of people through their darkest thoughts. it's a great thing you are doing. keep it up brother! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/1/2011 1:28:00 AM)

    I like that you include introductions. (Report)Reply

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  • Luz Hanaii (7/31/2011 11:11:00 PM)

    Beautiful words from a beautiful spirit. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/30/2011 9:25:00 PM)

    Beautifully beautiful my friend (: this has some very deep emotion in it, and it takes a lot to dive into that emotion and write it out into an amazing poem that the rest of the world can enjoy and be moves by. Oh, and the introduction is pretty great as well! Keep on writing: D (Report)Reply

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  • (7/22/2011 4:53:00 PM)

    Very emotive, the last two lines. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 11, 2011


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