Note Taking's Of Nature Poem by Not Long Left

Note Taking's Of Nature



Littered lanes
like clogged up viens,
where one ends,
another begins.
Concerete streams,
with houses upon there banks.
cracked and chewing gum bombed.

Discarded ciggarette's
sucked of all lengh and life,
disperse there foriegn leaves,
in petrol multicouloured puddles.
of painters pallets.

Ripples in puddles are born,
and live.
More are then born
as the first die,
the second follow course.
Born, living, dying,
a repeating pattern,
mirrored in every life.

Note taking nature in the early,
morning light
As the Sun rises over the horizons,
Broad back.
and bid's a parting wave,
to the tired night.
These eyes like sponges absorb,
As these hands filter out the sights.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Graham Jones 03 February 2006

A harsh look at reality but a very good write indeed.

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