Notes Poem by Liliana EL.

Notes



My need to fill the absence of you has seen me take to the pens and notebooks.
How would I act if I were with you?
Jumping and twirling in bursting joy and glee?
Perhaps standing quiet and tearing for the bliss I perceive.
I know how to tell you and what to say.
I'm not at a loss of words but rather caught in the wave of time constantly wrestling me.
My words are deep.
They can be powerful and strong.
But what I need is time with you.
Maybe even a hug?

I love you, but at this point, what are words but just my ramblings? I've often decided to leave it at 'I love you.
I love you because you are amazing. Really amazing.'

The power of love is with me everyday.
To put my experiences with and feelings for you could possibly take a decade.
To put these into words would be a great and powerful record that would prove, to generations to come, my love for you and the immense influence you have been for me.

Monday, November 4, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,standing,words
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Liliana ~el(11/4/2013 5: 59: 00 PM) Thank you, Mutuleanu, so much for inspiring me to reflect and spill these words! ~

'The miles between us
Have made me a poet
Otherwise, in your presence,
I´m silent as a feather.

I love you
But I don`t know how to say it,
It seems that words
Lack what`s necessary.

The power of my love
Lies only in my heart,
So to put it into words...'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vlad Mutuleanu 05 November 2013

Wow! Thank you. I didn`t know you shared this. You really are amazing!

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