i gave my world
i gave my life
but got in return
nothing at all
i gave up my dreams
i gave my hope
in wish to get bunch og joys for others
but got in return
nothing at all
i gave my desire
from the one i got inspired
i gave up my laugh
to wipe tears from other's lives
but got in return
nothing at all
i gave myself
to get changed for others
i gave my destiny to achieve identity desired by others
but got in return
nothing at all
i struggled whole my life
jst to bring joy in others life
but those 'others never realized and
got in return
nothing at all
I really like it. I'm able to relate to this and i like how you used repitition to add effect. It has a really nice flow to it, i enjoyed reading this (:
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I would like to translate this poem
amazing........really very nice.n its always happens to me like in dis poem.......thanx for this poem