Nothing Else Comes Close Poem by mithzi silva

Nothing Else Comes Close



To be with you is a crime
To be without is a punishment
But when we have our time
It’s the best moment

Nothing else comes close
Close to the way you make me feel
You make me stare out my windows
You’re just so unreal

It’s unconditional
The time spent together
We get so personal
That it’s like an undiscovered color

You are so good to me
But there is always that ‘but’
It hurts the ‘us’ badly
It’s like an old habit

I want to be with you
But others question if you want to be with me
I gotta wonder if we’re ever going to get a breakthrough
If not I believe we will be brief

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Kraas 18 September 2008

This poem tells me that htere is somebody that you don't like very much. But you rather be with him than nobody. Yes people need friends and good friends. Not the ones that takes advantage of you.

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Modi . 18 September 2008

'undiscovered color'... I just love that. Can't wait to use it in conversation one day, with your permission! !

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Saint Cynosure 17 September 2008

I love it, this is greatness...

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