Friday, June 22, 2007

Nothing...Rhymes Comments

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An orange
door hinge

rusting on
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Dónall Dempsey
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Chuck Audette 04 January 2008

Alas, if indeed your happiness hinges and a lack of rhyme thus impinges for if it's rhyme that you a door use foreign words to get some more and oddball phrases bring you far for what's a door when left a jar? -chuck

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Scarlett Treat 06 July 2007

I'm all Outta love, I'm no good without ya! And therefore, nothing is right anymore. Simply put, but direct, on target!

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Cicero Grey 22 June 2007

haha i like this poem. it's funny yet poignant in a strange way.

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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