Nothing To Fight Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Nothing To Fight
Nothing to fight
Under naked night
It is much to delight
And feel right
The silvery light
All objects are in sight
But you appear calm
Floating in realm
I wish
For night not to finish
As for the first time
She is with no dearth of time
I look at
And think of fate
How lucky am I?
To watch with naked eyes
She is within grasp
I smile and clap
She just hides face
I close the eye to find the trace
It's a good poem but it could be improved Ella Mae2 minutes ago I think it's a good poem, however I think you need to create more imagery and make the poem flow a little more. The rhyming seems like you have tried to base the whole line on the word, which doesn't make the poem flow as easily.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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doesnt suond untrue someone noone4 minutes ago sounds in view Comment +1