Notice Poem by Floyd Crenshaw

Notice



Today I almost hit a car.
Well, the car almost hit me.
Barreling through the commuter lot,
At least twenty.
I’m backing out slow.
Real slow.
But my head
Shoulder over shoulder
Right, blur, left, blur, right, blur, left
premium increase, cops, paper work,
a real stupid situation
vroom the pick up truck sped by
my brother didn’t even notice.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Jackson 25 February 2009

i love it i love it i love it! ! ! how true! seems to be a common coincidence put into lovely poetry!

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Samuel Pennell 25 February 2009

Floyd, this is excellent. I love the choppy nature of the later lines, brilliant! 10 Sam

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