Novel Ideas Poem by DM W

Novel Ideas

Rating: 5.0


Novel ideas
Are running wild, like tigers,
Through my febrile mind.

Saturday, June 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 06 June 2020

A most fine and engaging Senryu poem for every reader to take note of. The creativity shown in constructing your poem Dominic and your choice of the word febrile, a word so seldom used in poetry deserves nothing less than a 10++ full score. You have made my morning with your gifted poetry kind sir. Your originality, writing is outstanding and unique. And I welcome it. Thank you so much. Take care.

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Dominic Windram 08 June 2020

Thanks Shaun..much appreciated. I always think very carefully about word choices...very important.

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