Whirlwind lifting shapeless seas
Frosted
Crashing
In hot breeze
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A sight be found
Bare, raw flesh
Nudity
Sandpiper shifting shells for food
Millions
Billions
On top it stood
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A bug be found
Bare, bug flesh
And good
Nude, beach combing, swinging free
Jesus
Please
I looked back to see
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Virgin eyes look down
Bare, raw flesh
Nudity
Escape behind eyelids blushing red
Seconds
Minutes
Hurry by all these
Search about
Can isolation be found
No, just a sigh
Nude Beach Ahead!
Brilliant capture, snap-shot lines deliver this piece in true poetic form, with the added bonus of first class imagery. A fan 10+
Cute, nicely done. I for one would like to be warned, Some things are better left covered, Tho my eyes are not virgin, Most of us look better..... under-cover. T
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
enjoying the creative style of your well chosen and effective descriptive verse such an economy of evocative language