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Write comment. Nice poem, Angel. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

Short and sweet.Reading again.

its me again 11th line, it has to be 'everything is in place' not 'everything is at place'.

sorry man typing error...any thank you! !

good poem but the last line has to be 'throne' and not thrown. a very motivating poem and is really understandable. poem that tells that we all usually are caught in a vicious cycle of competition and to reach the top many try to pull others down in the process. but in the end we all end up in the grave. i often wonder why people are so mad behind fame and money when they know that they wont be able to take even a single thread with them to heaven let alone their bodies even. good write, one of my favourites.