O-Le-Coma City Poem by Tony Jolley

O-Le-Coma City

Rating: 5.0


On the leading edge of life
Where the world no longer turns
And the Sun neither rises nor sets,
Where even Time is held 'on-hold',
His hourglass grains frozen in freefall
Upon the bitter cusp of Forever;
There slumber the grey, unwaking shades
Of that other world
That lies within, yet without, the Land of the Living:
Those silent citizens of sad O-le-Coma City;
Immobile flesh and blood,
Unwilling or incapable of movement:
Some from shock;
Others from falling into an auto-hypnotic sleep
Where the magician-self has 'gone under' too –
Both now lost in depths far beyond the reach
Of the emergency services of consciousness;
Souls incarcerated in personal prisons of perfect inertia,
Dreaming unknowing,
Or silently screaming
To be let back into their own life
Before it passes them by.

Miracles sometimes happen in O-le-Coma City:
Some find their way back.

No one knows why.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 12 January 2009

Shivers going through this reader Tony - and great heart leaps of compassion for the subjects of your extraordinary verse - - which is painted vividly enough to evoke memories of seeing the same some years ago - - and the negative helplessness of the experience -- on a positive note a doctor once tried with wonderful success a mixture of vitamins and minerals on some of these people - - and a film was made of the outcome called 'The Awakening' - - - not as permanent as was hoped but it gave hope for some........ a top mark for the effect your verse had on one reader........ Fay 10 ++

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