O-Le-Coma City Comments

Shivers going through this reader Tony - and great heart leaps of compassion for the subjects of your extraordinary verse - - which is painted vividly enough to evoke memories of seeing the same some years ago - - and the negative helplessness of the experience -- on a positive note a doctor once tried with wonderful success a mixture of vitamins and minerals on some of these people - - and a film was made of the outcome called 'The Awakening' - - - not as permanent as was hoped but it gave hope for some........ a top mark for the effect your verse had on one reader........ Fay 10 ++