O Listen To My Heartbeats Poem by Anna Carpenter

O Listen To My Heartbeats

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O LISTEN TO MY HEARTBEATS
What does it say?
Like the rhythm
of the falling rain
Says your in me
Beating together as one
Keeping perfect time
Our chance to be together
For life- its nearly time

O WHAT SAYS MY HEARTBEAT
It beats only for you
And everytime it pumps
I know im feeling you.
Listen carefully what it says
Calling you by name
Will you just obey.?

O WHAT SAYS MY HEARTBEAT
Its loving feeling you
When it hears your calls
I know u love me too.
Don’t ever say goodbye
Cos if u say that
Dropps turn ocean
another tear I cry.

O WHAT SAYS MY HEARTBEAT
Hear it- hear it
Till the beat grows louder
Like a thunderous roar.
O feel my pain
Right now, mine beats alone
And im missing you again.

O THIS SAYS MY HEARBEAT
I need yours for all times to stay
For I miss you all the more
Everytime you go away.

DONT EVER GO AWAY

(Arthur --this one is for you)

Anna
06-04-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 April 2009

hey arthur..............you are lucky person........so beautiful poem for you...........Good write......10+++++++++++..........

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Carl Harris 06 April 2009

This is a uniquely written and very charming poem to read, Anna. It's quite well phrased and tells it's story quite well. It seems to me that his poem was written when you were a bit younger, perhaps while still in your teens, since it seems more like a young lover speaking than a more mature woman of twenty-something narrating the poem. One's understanding of love and how one expresses it changes as you get older. Still, this is a good poem just the same. Carl.

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lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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