Thursday, November 5, 2015

‘o’ My Angel Of Paradise, Is This Thy Lips Or Is This Rose Comments

Rating: 4.5

‘O’ my angel of paradise,
Is this thy lips,
or is this rose;
Thy tears are sorbet,
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Sadashivan Nair
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 March 2016

on your bust, waist and hip gestures, thou an ocean babe; O’ my angel of paradise, Is this thy lips, or is this rose; Expression of great wonder at the sight of your fascination..... love your poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 November 2015

Wonderfully passionate write depicting the minutest details of the allurements displayed by the physique of the buxom damsel captivating the mind of the poet. Nice write-up. Enjoyed reading.9 points.

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Seema Jayaraman 05 November 2015

A lovely intense romantic ode to one's muse.. thanks.

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