Oblivion Poem by Mark Sebert

Oblivion

Rating: 4.3


Eyes wide shut
open -
for all to see!
darkness
descending
downard and
deeper than ever!

(my mind) .....dirty dungeon

Love is lost!

languishing.....................bemoan
groan moan

weepand howl ....... turn
your joy into
mourning: full of dry tears

eyes peeled open
like a banana

but.....

with a screwdriver and knife
split blood shot -

back to my notes
to drift back and forth
head bob job is not done

fall into



oblivion.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 06 May 2008

eyes wide shut...darkness is open for all to see! wonderful lines, mark!

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Nomi Mas 05 May 2008

it's got an edgy rhythm, tight. wud be great to hear it read out loud. great write.

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Aden orie 04 May 2008

i like it its good, keep it up

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Mark Sebert

Mark Sebert

Newport News, Virginia
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