Oblivion Poem by Mark Sebert

Oblivion

Rating: 4.3


Eyes wide shut
open -
for all to see!
darkness
descending
downard and
deeper than ever!

(my mind) .....dirty dungeon

Love is lost!

languishing.....................bemoan
groan moan

weepand howl ....... turn
your joy into
mourning: full of dry tears

eyes peeled open
like a banana

but.....

with a screwdriver and knife
split blood shot -

back to my notes
to drift back and forth
head bob job is not done

fall into



oblivion.

Sunday, May 4, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: howl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 06 May 2008

eyes wide shut...darkness is open for all to see! wonderful lines, mark!

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Nomi Mas 05 May 2008

it's got an edgy rhythm, tight. wud be great to hear it read out loud. great write.

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Aden orie 04 May 2008

i like it its good, keep it up

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Mark Sebert

Mark Sebert

Newport News, Virginia
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