Observations From The Café By The Roundabout Poem by Greg Davidson

Observations From The Café By The Roundabout

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Clatter, growl and grumble,
Through the roundabout they rumble.
Cars and trucks and motorbike,
All slalom through with mixed dislike.

Most drive around with mindful care,
Some, as if the roundabout's not there,
Drive straight on through, no never mind.
Was this part of the road's design?

By the roundabout I drink
My coffee, pen in hand and think,
About this scene played out before.
Is this another metaphor?

My coffee and my words run out,
As I watch the roundabout,
But I'll return some later time,
To sit, and think, and drink, and rhyme

Thursday, June 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: observation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 04 September 2016

Yes, it is a metaphor and a good one. Observation is also important to our Art. Well written, Greg. I'll visit your site again soon

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Gajanan Mishra 02 June 2016

my words run out, good one.

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