Saturday, June 1, 2013

Octet Comments

Rating: 5.0

i sing a song
sung by no other
you do not love me
why do i bother?
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Vishal Sharma
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Hazel Durham 02 June 2013

Such a heartfelt plea to your lover to come back to you! Great write!

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2013

Octet make thing stable and fine, so your poem, so nicely defined_Soul

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