indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Of Hurt N Love, A Senryu - Poem by indira babbellapati

hurt draws a line
love draws a longer line
just above it


Comments about Of Hurt N Love, A Senryu by indira babbellapati

  • Meggie Gultiano (12/19/2009 5:37:00 AM)

    a lovely write, Indira
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  • (12/18/2009 10:19:00 PM)

    of course above it, to make the hurt line shorter, ranjit... (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2009 9:55:00 PM)

    above it or over it? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 13, 2010

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