Off Of My Buddy List Poem by Ahtivah Lawton

Off Of My Buddy List

Rating: 5.0


Yes...finally i have deleted this thing out of my life
He is deleted off my buddy list even tho i hesitated twice
I even dreamt about being his wife not thinking about all of the consequences with dealing with his strife!
Yes...finally i have deleted him out of my life
That first kiss had me..like he put my own neck in his knife
He was even disrespectful and rude giving me all types of itchwackness...telling me how i should disown my clean ways and be his little slave hoe for the rest of my days just to give him some play!
Yes...this dude is finally deleted out of my life...
Having me feel bad of sneaking around and mistreating the body that was built up from the ground
And i couldnt even stop thinking about him.....even tho he was talkin to many other girls and treating them better than me in all types of ways...jus that one kiss had me hype for days
Y couldnt i jus leave im alone..i tried to break away and lord knows
Yes..finally he is deleted out of my life..bcuz the next time i will kiss anyone, i will be walking down the aisle in my pretty white dress and i will be somebodies wife!
Yes, this dude is off my buddies list....and even tho he hurt me...i dont regret that little itchwackfass kiss!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 November 2009

Yes..finally he is deleted out of my life..bcuz the next time i will kiss anyone, i will be walking down the aisle in my pretty white dress and i will be somebodies wife! Yes, this dude is off my buddies list....and even tho he hurt me...i dont regret that little itchwackfass kiss! .....hi grreat poem and true love is reflected all over.. you an't deleter him but miss al the time....wonderful piece of writing....10 read mine... anywhere.. mary tomarry.... miss i miss you.. buterfklies around

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Christopher Montalvo 11 September 2009

I really liked this one, enjoyed how you were serious in some moments, but you were also able to poke fun at the situation.10/10

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Brooke Luchich 02 July 2009

This is a great poem, I love the use of words. Good work =)

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you have interesting insight.. good poetry. reread it..

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r khan 02 July 2009

giggle giggle giggle, SO funny! loved the honesty. Sometimes all you can do is laugh at stuff that makes you cry!

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Ahtivah Lawton

Ahtivah Lawton

Brooklyn, New York
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