Matthew Edan Oliver Palma

Rookie - 255 Points (February 2,1975 / Pateros, Rizal)

Oh Brother, Louie! - Poem by Matthew Edan Oliver Palma

Oh brother, Louie! Why ever so choose to be silly?
Is that even the right way to dougie?
Drop your manners and join them run around willy-nilly…
It seems the piccalilli you ate early stole your state of being stilly…

Oh brother, Louie! Why let your good image shatter?
Is it worth the risk of losing your name’s attar?
Leave your tasks undone for some mindless chatter…
Beware the folly of the ratter who makes so much clatter…

Oh brother, Louie! Did you lose sight of the plan?
Have you truly forgotten what makes a true He-Man?
He’s one uneasy to reproach, he’s got his act all spic and span…
If still you choose to pay no heed, then you’ll end up like an ape-man…


Comments about Oh Brother, Louie! by Matthew Edan Oliver Palma

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/30/2011 6:08:00 AM)


    An interesting poem; ; ; ; ; ;
    I like this one and must Louie understand this! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 21, 2011


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