Sunday, August 18, 2013

Oh Where The Independence Comments

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Today 15th August, Day of patriotism
Independence from of British rule,
Oh! Where is the Independence I say
With crime rate still the same,
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Soni Mirchandani
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Jazib Kamalvi 04 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Gayathri. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Reshma Sundarrajan 04 October 2017

Thanks would definitely like to read ur poem.

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Anandh Kumar 11 November 2015

Good portrait of today`s India. Keep writing. All the best.

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Ramesh Rai 26 September 2013

I agree with you. A brilliant and eye opening write.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 August 2013

Heart touching one, thanks, I like it, go on writing. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 August 2013

an eye opener.so long as the poor remain poor we are not independent.nice ink.the state of the nation is real very gloomy.

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