Old Man Waiting Poem by Barry Middleton

Old Man Waiting

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Death is patient waiting
for this old man
who wanders in the park.

He makes a vain attempt
to spark awareness
of the motive
that brought him here.

He cannot move his mind,
but vaguely knows
it has to do with spring
and laughter.

He has confused
the flowers by the path
with girls in rowboats
smiling at their lovers.

He shakes his head,
and only for a moment
his eyes return to youth.

He passes by a couple
on a bench,
and tips his hat
to say the day is good.

Saturday, April 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: old age
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Phyllis Gunkel 10 May 2016

It's funny how your poems are about men but the sentiments are man/woman, particularly as we age. In this one, it's wonderful how you show what seeing really is- not necessarily what's in front of our faces and has a name, not a Webster's Dictionary denotative exactness, but a connotative olio of experiences, emotions, remembrances.

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Nosheen Irfan 04 May 2016

Old age is so beautifully depicted here. Memories make up a huge part of an old man's life.

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Barry Middleton 04 May 2016

Thanks for the read and the comment. Glad you liked it.

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