On A Voyage Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

On A Voyage

Cage,
Age,
Advantage,
On a voyage;
Vantage! !
Vintage,
Living your village.

Tuesday, January 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: age,village,voyage,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 17 January 2017

Two three-line sections separated by a semi-colon. In the first, the distance between cage and advantage is measured by the readiness of the journeyer to reach his Age of Discovery, then he sets out to achieve to achieve his success (advantage) . He finds that success in a village but no ordinary village, this is one that fulfills him, he may even fins his main squeeze in one of the maidens who admire his bravery. For the moment he will observe and assess as his enjoys the vintage wine this village is famous for. And everything he sees, hears (Oh, the music they play!) , tastes, and touches is sweet beyond measure! This is H-O-M-E! !

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