On Arrival This Goodbye Is Poem by Mantu Mahakul

On Arrival This Goodbye Is

Rating: 5.0


While dawn is on arrival, half moon goes far,
Feeling shyness of facing light, moon thinks,
Trees giving fresh air try to cover in leaves,
Branches bow down and stems up-rise soon.
Boon of God is sprinkled and mercy floats,
Mind judges and we see half moon in day.
Wisdom spreads fragrance even in darkness,
God says, 'behold every memory and light, '
'This comes in work, behold calmness you all, '
Moon is very calm to say goodbye to this day,
Sun has learnt this from moon and sun is calm
To this dawn we admire for giving peace surre,
Life is filled with experiences as moon carries
Here is arrival, the birth of the new dawn is,
This moon says good bye to this dawn to rise,
While dusk will come moon will too teach us,
At day time sun and at night moon empower,
We see this unified beauty is given by God,
Life rests on truth and trust. We love father.
Glorifing his name, this beauty sings ever.
You see and feel. On arrival this goodbye is.
Like we take birth and and we face death,
But this process is not an end. This starts.
God is great, God is merciful. We are lucky.

© Mantu Mahakul, ,05 January 2017. Copyright is protected along with cover photo © Mantu Mahakul​,2016.

On Arrival This Goodbye Is
Friday, January 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,nature,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2020

Adding the 10 Full Score for this amazing poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2020

Glorifing his name, this beauty sings ever. You see and feel. On arrival this goodbye is. Like we take birth and and we face death, But this process is not an end. This starts. God is great, God is merciful. We are lucky. SUCH BRILLIANTLY WORDED, BEST CAPTURED EVER, GOD IS GREAT AND MERCIFUL. WE ARE LUCKY EXCELLENT POEM, DEAR MANTU. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING. I read this with greatest pleasure

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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