On Arrival Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
On Arrival
On arrival
It is immaterial
For human
What you write
Or ignite
It matters
When it really caters
The need and hunger
Really needed to control anger
What ails society?
Or people called mighty
It is thought
That is specially caught
You need not write
At night
Or when surrounding is calm
That shall crate more harm
It must come from heart
Not as an art
But with feeling of compassion
For human relation
If you feel their pain
And can weave in to maintain
With same spirit
For all to greet
I think mission is complete
As human lives can relate
In comparison with animals
They too love too much on arrival
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Art Barber18 minutes ago The poem tells that there is a lyrical ability, but there are grammatical issues that don't seem artistic in source. Also, it feels as if the poem wants to rhyme and wants to have meter. Unfortunately, there are distracting exceptions. I feel like this poem could be better if written in a more decisively free-form style. Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it is my style.6900 poems so far with same style Comment 0
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On arrival It is immaterial For human