Saturday, December 26, 2015

On Bed With Tears Comments

Rating: 4.5

Remembering those days
you lie on my lap,
my hands wander in your chin;
Under that beautiful moonlight
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Buvanji Bharat
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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2016

Lovely depiction of distress and heartbreak occasioned by disappointment on the exit of blissful love. Love is a spiritual experience and a voyage of pure bliss. It's however whimsical and temperamental, appearing when it pleases and may leave without warning. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Buvanji. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 December 2015

Very touchy poem.. keep sharing

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Buvanji Bharat 27 December 2015

Thanks

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Pranayee Gupta Rachamalla 26 December 2015

dear poet this is a very nice poem....a very emotional one! heart touching........keep writing such beautiful beautiful poems!

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Buvanji Bharat 27 December 2015

thanks a lot

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