Tuesday, August 8, 2006

On The Breadline Comments

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In the baked dough of flour, water and yeast
they were chatting merrily while baking.
The robust baker listens; ' flour said' I was in a big field
and then after the crop they took me to a mill and they grind.
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Duncan Wyllie 14 August 2006

Dear Nimal I agree with Sandra, she seems to have said it all This is very wise and very enjoyable Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 08 August 2006

There is physical poverty and there is poverty of the spirit. The queen of France suffered from the latter condition.. Her careless words became the rallying cry for war and in the end cost her her own life. Words are very powerful. Thank you for speaking some silent poetry on behalf of those who have only a small voice to speak for themselves. Sandra

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Emma Johnson 08 August 2006

A very clever piece with a very interesting title. Susie.

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