On The Edge Of Eternity Poem by Timber Koleden

On The Edge Of Eternity

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When one is on the edge of eternity
When death is closing in, and all noise is drowning in the din
And the enemy is driving you to the sea

When hope for going home is gone entirely
When desolation is all you see, there is nowhere to flee
And the dawn shall never rise again so fiery

Fold your trembling hands to pray so quietly
That from sin you might be free, forgiven indefinitely
That angels might come down amid monstrosities

And gather up your soul in their shining wings
And fly beyond the farthest star, to that land so fair and far
Where you might bow before the Holy King of Kings

A sinner washed in the blood forever clean
Of the lamb who for sinners died, who was torn and crucified
Who made the Way for the desperate soul to see


Fold your trembling hands to pray so quietly
That from sin you might be free, forgiven indefinitely
That angels might come down amid monstrosities

And gather up your soul in their shining wings
And fly beyond the farthest star, to that land so fair and far
Where you might bow before the Holy King of Kings

A sinner washed in the blood forever clean
Of the lamb who for sinners died, who was torn and crucified
Who made the Way for the desperate soul to see

On The Edge Of Eternity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In May 1940, during the Battle of France, hundreds of thousands of British and Allied troops were trapped by the German army on the beaches of Dunkirk, facing certain capture or destruction. What were the soldiers trapped at Dunkirk thinking, I wonder, as the enemy was about to annihilate them in a matter of hours? This poem was sparked by that thought, and written to the tune of 'Walking in the Air', if you like to read poetry to music. I hope that you enjoy it!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2026

What a beautiful, discerning and inspiring poem. A well thought out poem that expresses utmost fear and loneliness but great faith in the Lord and courage will give light in the darkness. Very well written and presented.

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Rebecca Navarre 18 March 2026

Thank you, Thank you! ... For sharing these! ...+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 18 March 2026

I am at a loss of words at this poems heart and beauty! .. Ever so dear and ever so precious this is! .. Beyond #Ing And Stars! .. So Endlessly! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 18 March 2026

Ever such breathtaking beauty and heart! ... And again ever so deeply profound! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2026

As I read your Poet's Notes, I pondered how these courageous souls faced the inevitable destruction of lives. Mind blowing! To my favorites and thank you for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2026

A timely write for this Lenten Season. A great read and the thoughts embedded in this poem are very contemplative.

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