Once Poem by Fatima Obaid

Once

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Once I found myself walking in a deep dessert, under the tunnel, roaring voices of silence, eco of my breath, full of thunder and dazzling rain at black, walking steps; make me to a turn look, found nothing except shadow, Once more started journey in a milky way Body was wet, hands were ice, knees were jam, mind was stuck, lips were dry, life was corrupt, and HEART is still on breaking...

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Aman Arora 07 September 2013

Nice attempt. Keep writing.

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