We live and die
Say hi and bye
For all the sake
Don't let me wake
In fear's land
I found one band
Who lead me to right
I can say 1 direction is light
Nice write... Exact and to the point.... Nothing superfluous... I read some of ur exquisite poems, but here U seem to be at ur best... Mature writing, thoughts moving towards a specific direction.. Well done... Keep it up.. S-Jan
short and meanngful................very legant in its simplicity yet very sublime and complex loved it :)
oh I am also a DIRECTIONER... and glad to know you are also...
Short but inspired writing.Keep on composing poems.For this, my vote is 7.
v nice poem with a postiive note embedded in the end....finding a ray of light, , , gud write
Powerful! A few you meaningful words that clearly are thought provoking and touching! A very positive message filtered through this short but amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Your talent is shown in this great write! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a nice poem, short but meaningful, thank you for sharing have a peaceful day!