Once upon a time, a girl was looking at the sky
With the rainfall streaming down her face
standing alone in the road
without anyone in the view.
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Reminiscing all the sweet dreams...then the shattered glass........ take life positively. life is much more....... go on and you are going to find your way of success. thank you. tony
Sir tony, thank you for the comment, I really appreciate it :) I will take your advice to take life positively: D
An insightful depiction of nostalgic experience recalled as one faced the deplorable conditions at lowest ebb of life. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Lodelyn. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Thanks for the compliment Chinedu Dike: D