Wednesday, January 18, 2006

One A Day Hero Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shells burst around me, my first battle has begun.
I could tell with metal flying this was not for fun.
I flopped in a hole that was tilled with rank muck,
surely I thought this would bring me luck.
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Angelo Ventresco
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Duncan Wyllie 19 February 2006

This was really captivating, felt as if I was there on the scene watching.Love Duncan

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Charles Chaim Wax 18 January 2006

what a poem! flowing and furious with honesty and the great dream of peace in the heart even amid the shouts and applause of hometown folks a fine poem

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