One Clay Sun Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

One Clay Sun

Rating: 5.0


Clay hands spin in and out
the edges of the running day.
Fingers smooth the blooming
clouds thick soft cotton base.
Hands pump the petal up and
down as faces run in and out
of the early mornings yellow sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
gurka khan 30 July 2009

simply brilliant, i love this style where reader has complete freedom upon an explanation 10+...

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Marieta Maglas 30 July 2009

Nice descriptive poem , in which we can discover the meaning of colors and texture, where the matter and the light are viewed overall.....10+++

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Patti Masterman 30 July 2009

This poem is awesome. It says so much in few lines, and I love the allegory.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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