' My Heart Is Heavy' Poem by James McLain

' My Heart Is Heavy'

Rating: 3.3


From the center of my heart, your many lost songs.
From the heart of one single tear.
I am lost like you both apart, one is beating.
Gone from our gentle childhood.
Each wave grew like the sea on us so heavy.

Like me, it is not possible to give it away.
One of my songs does not belong now to me.
However when light is from the moon,
You I found.
And I sitting upright
awake at the evening of rooms.

When one moth goes here and where to high.
The fruit when heavy is to ripe to fall.
I have known of no one like you of that.
Gentle the thorn the red rose never picked.
You are seen healing the hearts of them all.

Thursday, January 5, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: green
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meena Mustafa 20 August 2012

A excellent write! tyvm

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 15 February 2012

Very profound, it cuts deep into the heart. The words expressed the feelings so intensely. Excellent writing!

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Heather Wilkins 29 June 2013

beautifully expressed poem. enjoyed the read

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Shania K. Younce 18 March 2014

A very beautiful poem. I really like it. Bien!

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An enjoyable read my friend!

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So full of emotion, gentle, soft touch of love like the rose petals and a healing poem that heals the heart. Thank you James for this beautiful poem.......10

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Soran M. H 27 December 2019

Gentle the thorn the red rose never picked. ............... might once that heaviness will go away... we hope great poem 10/10

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. A passionate piece with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, James.

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Valentin Savin 10 February 2019

Well written: Gentle the thorn the red rose never picked. You are seen healing the hearts of them all. Thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2018

One of my songs does not belong now to me. However when light is from the moon, You I found. Moon brings the love that suits to you.

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