One Drop Poem by Kevin Patrick

One Drop

Rating: 5.0

I would rather be a rain drop
That drowns in a desert
And die by myself
In the scorching rays
Of an arid earth
Alone within my own world
Then to be a lost rain drop
Falling inside an ocean
Of a billion desperate tears
Clawing and drowning me
in the weight of their suffering


For a drop in a desert
Only dies once
A drop in an ocean
Dies a billion times


That old song lied

One
is not a lonely number
If it buys you
peace of mind

Monday, February 26, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,ocean
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There are worse things then being alone. Like being around a world of people that you feel isolated from and lack connection too. When you cannot connect its a cruel death of being
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 26 February 2024

Your notes added value to your wonderful poem. Full******

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 February 2024

What a wonderful and meaningful poem. Liked the message embedded in this well expressed write. Superb imagery.

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