Saturday, October 7, 2017

One Frosty Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked the lonely village street,
Were pavements glistened beneath my feet,
Above that building tall and grey,
Began the life of another new day,
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Jane Davis
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 October 2017

Beautiful narration of the natural feel of the surrounding..! A very nice poem.. enjoyed reading it..!! Dr Dillip K Swain

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2017

You have gained amazing experience walking in the lonely village street. Your footsteps echo loudly and clearly along with beautiful morning breeze. Night has gone and there is no darkness. Light has appeared to show path in village and forest. An excellently penned beautiful poem is shared from perception.10....Welcome to PoemHunter.

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