Saturday, January 15, 2011

One Last Dance Comments

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Baby would you runaway if given the chance
But first would you stay for one last dance
To the song we first danced to so many years ago
With the lights dimmed and the music smooth and slow
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song stay alone dance
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Warrith Bolaji Olawale 15 January 2011

Nice emotional poem, with good musical rhythm. I Just wrote a poem- the second chance, i would appreciate your comments on it

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