Saturday, December 5, 2009

One Of A Kind. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Broadened out, now gigantically big,
The pig held his snout to the rail.

He surveyed me, then began digging
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Fay Slimm
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As a kid, I had a pig sty, I remember those days. It was fun. it was not fun cleaning that thing though. when they did not get their food on time, they were mean. one time one bit my mother. this poem is good.. and different.. which is good.

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Patti Masterman 05 December 2009

Awww, he's not just bacon he has a big ole heart and feelings too; and you Faye, have one of the largest hearts around, and I salute you. Wish I had been there to be kind to Mr. Boar too! (smile)

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Bob Gibson 05 December 2009

Something's, i find hard to swallow! you and the pig, in mud did wallow you scratched his belly, your heart was aching were you thinking, that's a lot of bacon :)

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Daniel Kempson 05 December 2009

Unusual poem but good 10 Daniel

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Carol Gall 05 December 2009

different but interesting shows every crearure needs love 10

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Catrina Heart 05 December 2009

truly one of a kind......wonderful piece shared here, meaningful one! ! ! 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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